Brian Paone

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"Moonlight City Drive 2" has been submitted to my editor

I started writing the sequel to my 2017 supernatural crime-noir novel, Moonlight City Drive, back in July. I had never expected the book to become a trilogy, so when I wrote the first part, I wasn’t worried about finding loopholes or ways to extend all these characters’ storylines. That proved to be the hardest part of writing a sequel to a novel that I had no intention of ever writing further.

But, here we are, middle of December, and the second draft of Moonlight City Drive Part 2 (subtitled Electric Boogaloo) has been sent to my editor for a first-half release schedule in 2019. However, this time I was smarter. I went into writing the sequel knowing this was now going to be a trilogy (with Part 3 slated for 2021), so I could purposefully leave larger breadcrumbs, and I didn’t feel so guilty about leaving bigger plot holes wide open. I was able to set the characters into specific places, like playing chess, so their movements and behaviors can be continued (and finalized) in Part 3. That was also slightly difficult for me: to leave characters slightly unresolved, knowing their story will be wrapped up in another book. I have never had to write/think like that before with any of my novels.

So now, I’m just sitting back at the pool with an umbrella-adorned cocktail, waiting for my editor to return the novel so I can work on the third and final draft.

Moonlight City Drive turns 1!

Of my four published novels, nothing has compared to the journey of Moonlight City Drive; my supernatural crime-noir thriller. What started with a Facebook message back in October 2016 turned into a year of the fastest and most grueling writing schedule I've ever had to keep in regard to the writing process of any of the novels so far. It was the first novel that had a strict deadline and a confirmed book release party months in advance—in Cleveland no less!

The book, a rock-fiction novelization of Dog Fashion Disco's Adultery album, is not only revered by the band's fans as their masterpiece, but even some say it might be the greatest concept album ever written. I knew I was stepping into some of the largest shoes one could step into as a rock-fiction author and that the potential for disaster or being blacklisted as a rock-fiction author was a very good possibility if I didn't get it just right. I know, unequivocally, if I mucked up this story and didn't ride the wave of the fans' expectations right on the crest all the way through, there would be public backlash. And the possibility of a large, bearded man hiding in my bushes with a machete, Annie Wilkes style.

So, I did what any good and professional rock-fiction author would do: I drank a lot of alcohol and used the fans with me, not against me. The band members themselves got involved and were always available and transparent with what they expected from me as the author and were willing to answer any questions I may have had with some of the more ambiguous lyrics of the album. (Is all their hair REALLY on fire? -- okay, that was never asked, but I use it as a humorous example).

Fast forward to November 2017. Moonlight City Drive is finished, edited, printed, and shipped en masse to Cleveland for the big weekend. Dog Fashion Disco hosted a two-day concert event at the Agora Ballroom and brilliantly realized we could make it the book's official release party too. The band and I signed 200 copies of the book as a limited-edition version, which was a trip. Sitting in a lobby of a hotel with the members of the band who had written the album that I had adapted into a novel, all signing the book. Todd Smith, the vocalist and lyricist of the band, during the signing offered me the best review of the book I could ever receive: "Brian, you really hit this one out of the park …" That was all the validation I needed for the six months of outlining, four months of writing, and two months of editing that had gone into the novel.

This is also the first novel where I had merchandise available for sale as companion pieces to the book. The band approved the "Top Gun For Hire" campfire mug (which is the exact mug the detective main character was given as a birthday gift by his secretary and drinks out of throughout the book), the "Rippetoe's Jazz Lounge" shot glass (which the reader can own the shot glass from the main character's favorite drinking spot throughout the book), and "Desert Palms Motel" and "Rippetoe's Jazz Lounge" matchbooks (which play an important role in the book's action.) 

The reaction from the crowd about the book, once doors opened on both days, was amazing. Nothing but love and hugs from the real Mushroom Cult. Which, this book was really written for. The reviews have consistently remained positive so far. I guess I don't have to worry about the large, bearded man in my bushes anymore.

On stage during the second night, before they went into the Adultery portion of the set, Todd officially announced and endorsed the book to the fans, saying the bands' "great friend" and "an amazing writer" wrote the Adultery novelization. From a professional standpoint as a rock-fiction author, THAT is the promised land; having the band publicly endorse your work to their fans. It means they recognize it as part of their "canon", and your work is considered quality enough to add to their brand.

What else could I ask for as a rock-fiction author? Oh yeah … when I wrote Moonlight City Drive, I had no plans whatsoever for there to ever be a sequel. I have never written a sequel to any of my novels yet, and to be honest, I always thought of myself as a one-and-done author. Until, that is, a few months after Moonlight City Drive had been published and the enormous amounts of emails and messages I received from readers who wanted to know what happened to these characters after the final chapter had ended. So, I did something I had never done before: seriously contemplated turning Moonlight City Drive into a proper trilogy. So, On July 12, I started my first sequel to any of my novels.

Part 2 starts just six hours after the ending of Part 1, dragging all the characters you love (or hate) from the first book right into the action of Part 2, along with introducing new and unsavory characters into the mix. I wanted a seamless transition into the sequel—not one of those "15 Years Later …" beginnings, where all the characters and locations feel disjointed and it feels forced and contrived.

The release timeline will follow a strict two-year schedule: Part 2 in 2019, Part 3 in 2021.

And yes, this will only be a trilogy. I have zero interest in making Moonlight City Drive into a series that extends past three books.

Moonlight City Drive Part 2 - First Draft Finished

When I finished writing my most recent novel, Moonlight City Drive, back in fall 2017, I did not have any visions for a sequel or had any desire to continue the story line of these characters. But after talking with multiple people who had read the book, the consensus seemed to be that there was certainly a desire from the readers to know “well, what happened next??”

I knew in my heart of hearts that I didn’t have a true series of books in me within this story arc, but I also didn’t want to just have a single sequel. So, the decision was made earlier this year to make Moonlight City Drive a trilogy.

I began writing Part 2 in July of this year, and last week I finished the first draft. It comes in at just over 80k words (this is 3k words longer than Part 1). But the first draft is always filled with scenes that need to be cut or expanded upon, so the word count doesn’t really became closer to the final product until the second draft is completed.

I started the second draft yesterday, and my editor has penciled me in to have that draft to her in December. That’s where the 3rd and final draft will take shape. So, we are right on schedule of releasing this book in 2019, with Part 3 coming in 2021 (all books having 2 years in-between them.)

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